So, a man walked into a bar. He tried to appear casual, but he was noticeably huffing and his eyes were quite shifty. He sat down on the bar stool and before he could speak, he bartender looked at him square in the eyes and asked, “Are you underage young man?”. He was sure that he would get the standard denial.
Alluring title…
Inspired to write something along that line…
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I hope you do! I’d love to read it. 😃
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I like how you continually drew us in then saved the “reveal” until we became more invested in the story.
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Thank you so much for reading it. 🙂
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good one 😃
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Very well written ,i would love to get your feedback on my first blog post 🙂
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Yes ofcourse I will check it out. 😃
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Thank you 🙂
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After reading this it puts me in deep thought but I love it!
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Thank you for reading. 😃
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Wow. Wondered how he got there. Tell us more. Nice work.
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this. 😃 I am happy that an amazing writer like you enjoyed this short piece.
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Amazing writer calls me “amazing”! Wow!
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Aahh the suspense ! Good one.
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not bad at all I’ve heard stories where a bounty hunter would take the person who they are taking back to the lock up to a bar buy the person a drink, and let him have a smoke before turning him in…
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Wow! Really? I have never heard of that before. Thanks for telling me, I’m going to read up on this.
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What a story! I had to read twice 🙂 Very well done!
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I am glad you liked it. ^_^
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One last drink……
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Totally didn’t see that coming….good job! Reminds me of the Rehab song The Bartender Song…..also, it brings up the political question of why minors can be tried as adults and face adult penalties but in every other area of society be treated as children. I don’t know if that was your intention, but if it was, it was subtle and well done.
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Exactly! Thank you so much for taking the time to read it. 🙂
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Hey! I am just surprised by the way you wonderfully put words and write this post!
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The title immediately drew me in. And by the end I had sooooo many questions! Great job!
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