Sometimes I get a little saucy.

I think about you sometimes,

about the way you look,

about the way you taste.

I dream of feeling you brush against my lips,

as they tingle with the heat you radiate.

I’ve loved you in all places,

in all shapes, in all sizes.

I yearn for you.

I yearn to feel you enter my mouth and excite my tatse buds.

I want to feel you in me,

to feel whole, with you.

I must have you once more.


Dedicated to all the cheeseburgers waiting to be consumed by me. What did you think?

I’d love to get some feedback on these kinds of posts, and whether I should even be writing them. I’d like some criticism too. Thanks. πŸ˜ƒ

53 thoughts on “Sometimes I get a little saucy.

  1. Hahahhaa twisting plot and someone could have thought otherwise.πŸ˜‰

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    1. I agree :-)But love the methaphor. Very saucy!

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  2. That anti-climactic moment though πŸ˜‰
    Loved it. πŸ™‚

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  3. In this sense, I also yearn for some sauce and tinge…πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ Yes…a proud lover of cheese burgers πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜πŸ˜

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      1. Same here dear πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

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  4. I love everything about it; twist and playful writing obviously. But picture, background and gorgeous font all work too. Great job!

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    1. Thank you so much! This made my day so much nicer. πŸ˜ƒ

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  5. Loved the innuendo, brought to a nice climax too πŸ˜‰

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    1. Thanks a ton for checking out my working and commenting as well. πŸ˜ƒ

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      1. My pleasure, thanks for stopping by too.

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  6. OooooπŸ˜ŒπŸ™ˆ

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  7. This was really fun and playful, I really enjoyed it! Well done πŸ™‚

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    1. Thanks for taking the time to read. πŸ™‚

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  8. I’m not smiling. Might steal this idea. Sorry, it’s too good not to.

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    1. Thank you so much for taking the time to read it. ^_^

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  9. What a sweet or should i say tasty twist!!

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  10. This really is my cup of tea. As a journalist, when someone nudged you one direction, I immediately wondered what was in the other direction? As a writer, my mind works the same way. It makes life interesting. Could this be called food porn?

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    1. The idea of it being food porn is absolutely hilarious! πŸ˜ƒ
      Thanks for taking the time to read it.

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      1. It was my pleasure and, given my track record today with comments, you can take whatever you like out of that. Nothing will surprise me but one always hopes.

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  11. The Poetry Channel August 10, 2016 — 7:55 pm

    The double entendre is a favorite of mine as well. It leaves the poem ambiguous enough for people to take multiple meanings away from it, and/or one or the other depending on the mood. A fine piece.
    Thanks for asking me here to read your work, I enjoy it.

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    1. I am so glad that you liked it, thanks you for taking the time to read it! I enjoyed coming up with the idea, it turned out somewhat better than I expected. πŸ˜ƒ

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  12. Nice job in sharing your love affair for cheeseburgers. Now I’m off to get me a McDouble minus pickles. (It’s that awkward moment when lustful sounds of moans fill the air).

    Continue to express and share you gifts with the world. Never doubt your calling.

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    1. Get one for me too! I know what you mean when you talk about the moans! So true. πŸ™‚
      Thanks so much for reading my work! πŸ˜€

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  13. It’s great and playful :P…do write more of them

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  14. Omg xD I loved it, it was getting so exciting in many ways πŸ˜‰ Loved it and now I want a cheeseburger….
    Great post!!! πŸ™‚

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    1. Hehe thanks for reading it. πŸ˜€

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  15. This made me laugh and smile not to mention the suspension. I totally thought that was going to take a differnt turn and then it ended up being about food. These are the post that make my day. Loved it.

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    1. I am so glad that you liked it. Thanks for reading it. 😊

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  16. This is GREAT! Much appreciated by a fellow cheeseburger enthusiast! Honestly I did not catch on until the dedication line. Thought it was a nice sensual piece and then laughed quite loudly! So great.

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    1. Haha! I glad you liked it. 😊

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  17. Very brilliant idea. I love the ambiguity. Okay , If that dedication was not included, I am pondering how the take on this would be different. Nice work here!

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    1. Thank you so much for your feedback. πŸ˜ƒ

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  18. I love this! I was not expecting it to be a cheeseburger but I can totally relate!

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  19. you really shouldn’t write stuff like this. you’re just encouraging bad behavior. now i’m going to start looking for romantic absolution in my next sandwich… and it’s all your fault

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    1. But those were my evil plans all along. *Cue evil villain laugh*.

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  20. desblogentertain August 21, 2016 — 2:27 am

    I love how your posts has curiosity behind every story. It keeps me interested.

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    1. I have only a few posts that I like, this is one of them :p thank you for checking it out.

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  21. Hahaha here I was thinking this was about something completely different. I loved it, the imagry was very intense lol

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  22. I fee the same way about a cheeseburger…and many other things πŸ™‚

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  23. So refreshing to have a fun poem. Some writers take their stuff way too seriously…making it an entire feed of serious writers writing the same poem about the same thing in essence. Truly inspiring

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    1. Thank you so much! I am so glad you liked this. Thanks for commenting as well. πŸ˜ƒ

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  24. This made me laugh out loud when I realised it was about cheeseburgers. What a brilliant post.

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  25. HAHA the title itself made me laugh a little and then the endπŸ˜‚Perfect

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